I am a little disappointed. I think only a handful of people read my short story. I know it wasn’t the kind of thing you expect to see here, but I wanted to try branching out. I think it is a powerful story with elements of military fiction, science fiction, adventure, fantasy and horror. I think the ending is a pretty good twist that takes it in a whole new direction. And I would love it if you helped me come up with the best name for that story. I am going to try sending it to some online magazines and writing contests, maybe get it published somewhere.
And now I will go back to doing the silly, goofy, weird stuff that you are used to. Because I have fun with that too…
Pouring My Art Out 
I’ll read your short story over the Christmas holidays when fewer people are posting & I have a bit more time, OK?
awesome!
Ehhh, you warned me off it, Uncle Art! I am after the family friendly stories, I am just a big kid at heart.
That works out well
Write a story using nothing but words in foreign languages, technical jargon or philosophy. It’s so fun, I forgot to laugh!
I tried to start days like that, but nobody linguini left-handed-smoke-shifter thought therefore they were.
Variegated animal crackers
common cockroach Albianian sock slippers to be or not 2-B insert into slot machine 1
Toze froze noze doze
I suppose
no one knows
where the rose grows
Or where the urine flows.
Who went pee pee right outside the teepee
who made the big bomb just inside the wigwam
Goes With Wolves?
Dances with wind
Tiny dancer
Little prancer
Big Donner
Donner party… table for 28… 27… 26…
Appetizers
Try the filet
Flaitlaaetlsltne’als
uh… no…
Are you sure?>
I liked it, it’s a tough time for wordpress traffic because of the holidays. Maybe you should repost it in February?
I never look back! Or forward… or to the side… sigh…
Each one of your chapters is titled with one word. Do the same for the story”s title.How about RANDOM , TEMPO,
Not bad.
I haven’t read it yet. I still have the first page open on my browser. I have had a lot going on this week.
I know, you have to pack for flying South… HA!
Haha yeah, that one 🙂
I can’t fight mother nature…
Dude, I only write fiction really and get very few actual readers, so don’t be surprised. People only have so much time. I’ll read the story when I get the chance, likely over the holidays.
Did you get my edits on chapters? I sent them couple of days ago. Hoping no screw ups with e-mail.
I did. But this holiday stuff gets in the way… I am going to try to use them this week, but right now all I can say is thank you so much,
I really liked it for what it’s worth. It reminded me a lot of an Outer Limits episode. I hope a magazine does pic it up. I’m not much good with titles. Maybe The Harvested/(r)…I’m sure you’ll come up with something. You always do!
On a side note, what happened to the rest of the illustrations?
I thought he had more done. His job is kicking his ass, and since my daughter lives with him, I can’t really complain. I might be able to share some more when he finishes them. Sorry about the confusion.
Np. Just asking. I’m sure they will be badass, too!
Those things take a long time to do.