I wrote another poem with my good friend Hastywords. She started it off, and we just danced the words together, taking turns on every other part. And I do like getting the last word in once in a while. Hope you like it…
It is called…
Her Stare
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Written by PMAO and HastyWords ♥ Her stare unnerved me I’d seen her here before I wasn’t sure what she saw But her eyes were seeing me Her stare intrigued me It roamed my body like a caress I felt it move up and down Like cool fingertips Her stare warmed me Turning the heat up a degree Made me feel alive Weaving fantasy I couldn’t see Her stare tempted me The offer was there To be unfaithful And break another heart Her stare wanted me Desire too hot to bear To break her gaze A chance I could not dare Her stare defeated me I was weaker than I thought I considered myself a good man It turns out that I am not —————————————– And don’t forget to check out more of her poetry, done solo and with some other brilliant writers, over at; http://hastywords.wordpress.com/
Pouring My Art Out 
I adore this – perfect rhythm and flow, what a superb duet (not that I am advocating being unfaithful at all). I really enjoyed the “it roamed my body like a caress” and the “weaving fantasy I could not see”. As for the denouement at the end, c’est très magnifique! Another triumph between two very talented bloggers, well done.
Thanks. That was very nicely said. And I do not advocate cheating either.
Excellent I must challenge you to a game of poker then!
Good choice.
Hah! You haven’t seen me play poker! The only way I can bluff is with a bag over my head.
So many jokes that could start from this point…
It’s the bag isn’t it? Chicks dig the bag. It turns you into an international man of mystery, they don’t know what to expect – will it be Brad Pitt or The Elephant Man? How exciting for them! Then again why would Brad Pitt be wearing a bag on his bonce? Maybe to stop his beard scaring small children. I know mine does. They’ve done tests you know.
It’s good fro kids to be afraid now and then.
Absolutely – I find it makes it so much easier to steal candy from them for starters.
Exactly.
I’m sure our Mothers would be very proud of us and what we have achieved. Child candy misappropriation has such a quality ring to it, I’d be proud to adorn it on my CV – it’s the vocation the world is crying out for and ironically what children are crying out for too!
Slightly-used candy wholesale redistributors…
LOL This was one of those that took me on a ride and I wasn’t sure where it was gonna go. It is always fun to write with someone else 🙂
I know exactly what you mean… thanks.
Clever.
That’s all we get???
That’s it. Be happy.
It wasn’t real…
You don’t say!
I am not the cheaty guy… just sayin’…
Hot. And sad.
Just like me… ha!
Errol Flynn would be great at reading this!!!
I want to do my ‘about’ page as Adolf Hitler…
Adolf Hitler lookalike or soundalike?
I want to do his voice. I could substitute funny foreign accents. No sense bringing Nazis into this I guess.
I would love to hear your German accent! Nazis can be good for a joke though:
That was awesome. I have seen so many movies with Nazis talking with British accents.
Mitchell and Webb are hilarious…but you can’t really do an authentic movie if the nazis are talking English even with a German accent…they spoke German.
But most WW2 movies are made in other countries.
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