This is just a mock-up. The text will not be exactly like that. And I think I will add more ships to show how huge the Black Fleet is. Remember, this will wrap around the book, so the left side will be on the back cover. I will put some more words there. Is it too cluttered?
Maybe I will put the text on the back in a white box, or a white cloud. I have had fun with the ships. They are all just the same ship, but I altered each one a little, with markings and other little changes. I also changed the propulsion flames.
Bonus points if you noticed that the moon in the lower left is one of my photos of that super blood moon that came out so poorly. I think it works here.
I feel the drawing looks good. Place the “Otherwheres Collide” in the upper left corner; that way you’ll have a diagonal impression, which will create a sensation of movement.
oh… cool…
looks cool :))
Thanks so much.